a group of vampire moves into a small countryside, they move place to place to hide there identity. a human girls comes contact with the vampire, who is very powerful but kind hearted. the vampire find the human girl's features similar to his dead wife. the human girl and the vampire falls for each other.
people started to get missing in the village, one of the vampire has broken the rules. the human girl went on investigating and solving that puzzle and whenever she is in trouble the vampire saves her but does not help her solve the mystery but tells her to stop. will they ever be together will the girl find out the real identity of him.
Www. Well done for creating a credible synopsis with a sense of tension and suspense.
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